Broken Wings

Hiya Syright, I'm Wings! I'm new here too, but already I've found what a great site this is! I hope you find it as wonderful as I do! --Wings

I wrote a little more, but I think the rest of the story will be written in my blog. Edit: Or not...

Yes, it can be fun at times. But mostly it's a pain in the butt to study. - Naera [a.k.a Sarah] No. There's no way I'm going to college, I ...

It's very good, good grammar and spelling. But this part annoys me: An angel stands over me, Brilliant white and smiling, A symbol of grace eternally. Just a pat on ...

I'm conservative. No doubt about it. All demons are...except Lila, but she shouldn't be a demon anyways. -Sibl [a.k.a Ryan] ~~~~ Where is the one place you've always wanted to ...

Well, I'm not sure what to say about that...it's sort of supposed to be like that. Thanks for pointing out my spelling mistake...except I can't figure out if it was ...

Ky is my only lord -- Sarah ~~~~ What's the point to your life?

:) 8)

Well, Ky will be explained later. and yes, Ryan is the same boy who was sleeping. It says he got up, put his paper on top of Sarah's and the ...

:o I'm sorry. It's just a small thing, I haven't edited it or anything yet. But, I'm not going to spend the whole post making excuses for you. The point ...

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This is a first for writing about demon things. I usually write about humans or wizards. But when my friend read another story of mine he said I should consider ...

Wow, this is wonderful. I loved it! Very interesting, I can't wait for you to post the next part! I don't have any complaints.

Yes! Please add more soon! This is beautiful writing, and I can't wait for more! I'll be checking back as often as I can :wink: With such a small piece, ...

Yes, very good for your first time. I didn't read through all of it though, I just don't like reading that much that isn't in a book or on word. ...